Your flash is good.. I don't mind clocks, your graphics are good, the sound is good.. BUT
The story is absolute crap. It had no plot, nothing new and interesting (im sure this is on the portal before). The graphics and stuff is good, except your plot is bad.
You got talent, just make better plots.
liked it. got a 5 from me good graphics. but when the guy shoots the trex it sounds like a cat.. whats with that?
need more practise, try attaching this stick figure limbs to the body, the end made no sense with the red shit flying around.
yo, theres a fwe things u need. Better animation and not so sloppy. Stop using linkin park for everything. And stop using those circle gradients they r annoying.
k wat the hell?
Umm.. That made no sense.
The graphics were horrible...
It was gay (no offense)
Better luck next time... if you try again.
Not that bad, I thought it was okay, but I think you could've used your own voice, not bonzi buddies. Just a suggestion though.
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